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Version One or Version Two

Hello, Lovely Readers!

I'm asking for your help today. You see, I have written two versions of After Death and I just can't decide which one I want to finish. Will you help me?

Below are both versions. Please take a moment to read them and vote which one you'd like to see published. Your opinions matter to me, which is why I've put together an INTERNATIONAL GIVEAWAY as a simple thanks for your help.

I'm excited to see which version wins.

Disclaimer: Grammar Nazis please forgive my errors. These are RAW chapters you're about to read with very little editing. With that said, I still hope you still enjoy yourselves.

Happy Reading!

~Version One~


~Version Two~



Which version did you like best?

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24 comments:

  1. I like Version One better. It feels like that one is more connected to Til Death. Version Two seems like a high fantasy, which is something that wasn't in Til Death. It's a sequel, so for me the two books should be connected in a way that will not disconcert the readers. :)

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  2. As much as I love fantasy stuff, I chose the ver one. It's the one more connected to Til Death. I just wish there would be lika special chapters (or it can be flashback or something) from ver two for the one you'll publish. It would be awesome to know the badass Serena :)

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  3. i like the format of version 2 :)

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  4. I like Version 2 because I like the way it has the Prologue written!!

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  5. I liked the continuation in version 2 and the setup of it better than 1.

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  6. I liked version one. it grabbed my attention right off the bat

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  7. I understood ver 2 better than the ver 1... The ideas on version 2 are arranged better than version 1 for me.

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  8. I will go for version 2. :) I find it more captivating than the version 1.

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  9. I think version 1 is more appealing (at least to me) and relates more to the story in Til Death. :)

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  10. I like version 1 better, it's more in line with what was written in Til Death. The chapters from the second version seemed to run in a parallel universe, although the prologue is more aligned with the ending from the previous book. And yes, I'm already speculating on how the story will end, and if the two versions can be put in just one book :)

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  11. I like Version 2 better because it moves a bit more slowly, kind of preparing you for the unfolding of the story. There is a prologue and there has to be a blank page for the "void." :D

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  12. I prefer the first one. I like it because it's very understandable for me. The version 2 has some vague sentences that confuses me, I think it's because of how you phrase some things. So my vite goes to version one.

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  13. For me, Version 2 has a better version because it has more appeal to it than version 1 :)

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  14. version 2 is better for me because its like a fantasy.

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  15. I vote for version 1. Version 2 feels like a different book and kinda not in relation to 'Til Death. Thank you!

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  16. I vote for version 1 because it feels more connected with the first book although the prologue in version 2 is aligned with the ending of 'Til Death.

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  17. I liked version 2, it has a nicely written story and i also like books about fantasy

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  18. I enjoyed both, but went with version 2! Fantasy books just are my favourite. :)

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  19. I'll go for version 1! It is direct to the point and the beginning immediately captures my attention.

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  20. i would have to agree with the previous reviewer, zairah and mary lois and katrina,. version one is more related to the first book.... and yes, the two version in one book will be awesome.
    looking forward for the second book and the third as well.. <3

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  21. I would have to agree with the previous reviewers (Zairah, Mary Lois and Katrina in particular). Version one is more related to the first book. but I think it would be awesome if 2 versions can be put together in one book just like what Katrina insinuated..:)
    Looking forward for the 2nd and also the 3rd book..hihi <3

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